Over spring break I looked over the first draft of my third paper quite a few times. However, I did leave the ending paragraph for this week (the first week back). This was mostly because I saw that it would need work all on its own after reading it (in the introduction and conclusion exercise we did on the Thursday before break) aloud to me group. I have just finished spending a few hours on it and minor corrections throughout the rest of my paper and can now say that my third paper, as a whole, is significantly better. The only other major change that was made, however, was the addition of an interview and a works cited. I was always planning on having these items in this third paper, but after I finished peer editing my group mate’s papers, I remembered that they were essential to this particular assignment. I conducted this interview through e-mail as I normally do because I find it is easier for the interviewee to have more time and be able to write out exactly what they would like to say.
-Julia St. John
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